Crunch week at work, so I was home after my daughter's bedtime every night and didn't write a word.
While I was at work she found the printout of chapter 5 on my desk and went through it with a pencil. Most of the notes are in the margins. My favourite one is next to a line where the gull says sorry:
"the gull would not say this. he is ruder."
She's completely right. He'd never apologise. Back to it tonight.
